I like the very essence of the story. Although, I want to say something about the summary. I like it though, but somehow I prefer it said this way. I hope Nodokatan wouldn't mind. "
Being a third party doesn't mean that you are destroying a relationship. It only means that you make two souls realize if they are truly meant to be.
...I used if, because on the original summary. It was (in my own terms only and understanding) one-sided. It doesn't have a choice, because it is telling that everyone who will have a 'third party' will result to an ending. LOL. Don't mind this though. Haha...
And because, Yamachan did love Daichan here, very much I can say. Although, Chii came. He made his existence known. If Yamachan and Daichan were really meant to be, even if Chii exists in the story. They'll stay strong. Nothing can stop their love and that's because they are destined for each other. But in this fic, Chii appeared and made a difference, meaning Yamachan and Daichan isn't meant for each other.
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Date: 2012-05-12 10:55 am (UTC)Being a third party doesn't mean that you are destroying a relationship. It only means that you make two souls realize if they are truly meant to be.
...I used if, because on the original summary. It was (in my own terms only and understanding) one-sided. It doesn't have a choice, because it is telling that everyone who will have a 'third party' will result to an ending. LOL. Don't mind this though. Haha...
And because, Yamachan did love Daichan here, very much I can say. Although, Chii came. He made his existence known. If Yamachan and Daichan were really meant to be, even if Chii exists in the story. They'll stay strong. Nothing can stop their love and that's because they are destined for each other. But in this fic, Chii appeared and made a difference, meaning Yamachan and Daichan isn't meant for each other.